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yo... this is like the 4th time

i have seen this same animation uploaded many times before.... i don't know if you are resubmiting this because it got blamed or anything... but if it got blamed once ITS GOING TO GET BLAMED AGAIN UNLESS YOU CHANGE SOMETHING!

mind the light

when filming keep in mind where the light is coming from. you could se the shadow of the camera and your hand in the whole video.

what to improve?

first: make something longer. second: USE YOUR OWN BODY! this is something i do, look at yourself doing what you want your character to do. notice your legs, arms, hips, head. notice the position they are and try to imitate it with your drawings.
now go and make something that's twice has good.

darkdar4 responds:

Thx for the comment very helpful

really nice!

the visuals were not that great, BUT! this whole animation was done using frame by frame animation! i know this took a lot of time to make, and the effort showed. the angles you pulled off where good. just make the drawings better and you'll make something AWESOME! ;)

AllStarKid responds:

Thankyou! :) This by far is my best animation I've ever made. I might remaster this with color and more features and such. Thankyou though! :D

aaaaaaaah yes :3

it was elegant. the music made everything look and feel so clean! you make stick figures proud :D i would, however have some sound effects for the fight, then have the fight muted at the part when they both fall. but that's just me :3

if you're thinking of a sequel...

HAVE SOUND!! remember that a sequel ALWAYS has to be better than the last one. i hope you do..... because this one wasn't good :/

tomutwit responds:

OK, i really don't understand sound in flash though, plesae put me in touch with someone who does.

i agree with teejay

the mario-sonic cross over thing is REALLY common in sprites. if you want to do a sprite animation, i recommend at least changing the characters..... i mean the bar has been set pretty damm high for sonic-mario sprite animation with "super mario bros. Z"

Lizam4 responds:

Way too late for me to change characters, haha. I've always loved the idea of Sonic and Mario together since I was young (I jumped for joy when I found out Sonic was announced for super smash bros brawl XD).

I know its hard to see, but I've never had the intention to compete with SMBZ, despite being inspired somewhat by it.

Thanks

well done

but is missing something... i cant really put my finger on it, but there is something that would make this go from a good animation to a GREAT animation. however, good job.

i really liked it! :D

people might criticize the art and the audio.... actually yeah, it could be better, BUT! it all came together really nicely. the drawings went with the quality of the audio ( not a diss >.> ) i really laughed at this. good job :D

i guess the white was not suppose to show...

make sure the window is the right size for your animation. also the pauses took too much away from the actual fighting.

im here to share some cool movies! make you lolz for a bit ;)

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