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[Bluey's Adventure]

did you get the idea from the spongebob episode where he eats a bomb pie? seems like there are a lot of similar points to both stories. i would have also liked to have more of a feel of closure. there is a bomb in his/her gut. what's he/she gonna do about it?

CyanSandwich responds:

I pretty much followed my original version. I have no idea how I came up with it since it was 3 years ago. I was thinking about that episode soon after I finished this though.

Also I wanted to leave the ending ambiguous for the slight possibility of a follow-up.

[Seeking Approval]

this has potential. your humor is good, but your timing needs a bit of improvement. the best joke was the guy blowing up out of nowhere. thats the kind of timing you need, sudden and spontaneous, i saw the guy pushing him out of the chair to check as soon as he started his mono-log of friendship

davidbcooper responds:

Thanks! I'll try and work on that. :)

[LOL Runner]

the production of this was excellent! it was all very fluid and the visuals & sounds went together really well. if only i had only played this game to have a better context of what is going on ^_^"

but really good job!

Pienkaito responds:

Well, thank you very much.
Lode Runner is quite challenging. Give it a try, if you have some free time to spare.

[NoPUNintendo]

loved all the puns! XD these were actually funny clever, unlike some that are are just a fur...... a bur......... a....... ah screw it, i have no puns for this review >.>

anyway. great visuals and awesome humor. :D

TerminalMontage responds:

Thank you!

[War of the Shyguys]

listen to the 6th-sage here. this guy has a lot of good pointers. and i have some of my own. a good thing to keep in mind is that not everyone knows what you are thinking, so when you hint at something you have to make it subtle, yet obvious enough for people who have never seen your work can get it.

another thing to keep in mind too, is to kinda veer away from the predictable like 6th-sage said. when the green shy-guy got kissed, i called it that he was gonna like the protagonist.

besides that, i can tell that you will keep getting better and better. no one starts being super awesome and perfect, is a process that requires practice. and you already have a lot of good points going for ya.

Eastbeast responds:

Thanks for the tips and pointers.

Although I believe I still can improve just like everyone else, there are a lot of things he and you referred to that are more taste driven, and in my opinion are over-done as well in most story lines, such as a predictable twist, the second enemy plot, and doing something random for the sake of random (cutting a dogs leg off?) which sort of bore me out of their pointlessness.

Of-course that is what I mean about the opinion of taste. I enjoy a simple story line which I think I showed could be exciting as well. You don't need a ton of unnecessary twist and turns to keep someone entertained, I like to put that weight on the characters and the situations they are in, and that will do nicely more so.

Thanks for the review.

[No Another Pokemon Parody]

HILARIOUS! the art was your own stile, but it still looked close enough to the originals. the movements were fluid and the lip sync was spot on! loved it. im a sucker for a pokemon parody video :3

and why did misty kill herself? D:

AngelXMIkey responds:

Its a reference to the Wizard of Oz munchkin urban legend.

[Sorin Shroud's Bio]

you have lots of potential! you left pivot for flash, CONGRATULATIONS. now that you have a GOOD program, learn its tools and effects. the next step for you maybe could be to bump up the frame rate and add some sound ;)

i can see that you at least are creative in the plot.

SorinShrouds responds:

Yeah, i'm still used to Pivot's ( Animate close to the last frame even in fights ) But i see now that in flash, its slightly different than pivot. ( Okay maybe its like a different world XD )

[Shadow of the Animators]

i like this because i think that this is the way of thinking of many or us that make animations. we all look up to one of those guys and we strive to be like them. i like the that way of thinking: "be better than them" might be REALLY hard, maybe impossible, but its a goal that will take you far. ( i think hanging out with them would be really cool too :3)

TerminalMontage responds:

Hah well I don't aim to be BETTER than them, I don't like how that sounds lol, just being as good as them one day would be nice :D And so would, making a decent amount of cash on youtube because of it.

Thanks!

[Space Dreams]

i saw this before. this exact animation. did you re-submit it? or whats going on here?

ehlboy responds:

not resubmitted!

[Especial Numero 10]

no se te entiende bien lo que dises. el volumen esta muy bajo y hablas un poco rapido........ y si ya llebas 10 episodios, no deberia ser un poco mejor la calidad de tus videos?

mileyniko responds:

mmmmm... si la verdad que si tendrias que ser mejor =S pero es que a flash lo estoy aprendiendo a usar solo tocando too los botones ni un tutorial encuentro =S saludos!! y gracias por tu opinion!!