guitan11's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goku Vs Sonic!]

i like this :D

this is actually not bad. although it was predictable and short. but the whole thing was a good mix of the visual effects and the sound effects. TRY to make something original! fighting sprites are not new, so you have to make something original or something that's EPIC. keep on the good work :D

SXR123 responds:

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed the video! and don't worry the sequel should be more action packed, more original and better use of sounds and effects.

btw, before responding I took a look at some of your flashes, I espeically liked the last one XD I was laughing at it so much XD It was hilarious. I hope I can see more of your work as well!

[Revolution : Mech]

hmmmmmm

not sure about this one.... the branching out of the mechanical parts and stuff was good, but then i really just didnt get was going on when the screen went yellow and red. if i could give you a tip: just make the animation more objective, more "obvious". by that i mean that make it so that everyone gets what you're trying to show. the title was the only thing that made me go "oh, those are mechanical parts"

videoJoe responds:

The first views of atoms and molecules were neither obvious nor objective. Therefore, this animation, despite being a first attempt, allows people to see the Revolution Mech. As a sketch, if you will, it does not have to be anything other than pure content. Considerations, convenience and compliment are all technical concerns that develop over time.

Unfortunately, I doubt that you really see the beauty of what is going on here. Look again, I have seen the revolution, and I will invest time in revealing it more, but I really am not doing it for people who don't look beneath the surface.

[Stickman-Shooting-Zombie]

alright

want a tip? make something longer. at least some good 20 - 30 seconds. and always remember this: act it out! pretend you just got shot in the head and notice how your body reacts, then transfer it to your stick man. always act out what you want to animate so it looks more natural. work on this. :)

JKSSN responds:

Your right, but i was just testing myself if I know the basics.
I think the zombie death scene was too fast, no bullet effect, no bullet wounds, too short, etc.
And the death scenes could use somework, but this calls for FBF, and that will take a lot of time doing!
So anyway, I promise to do something longer.

[Frumplequest 1]

i have seen this before....

did you submit this before or..........?

Ukinojoe responds:

Not to newgrounds.

[Internet Allstars 2011]

this was soo promesing...

i was expecting some more memes and internet jokes..... but the overuse of "FALCON PAUNCH!" was really annoying. sorry dude, it just wasnt what it could have been... :/

RicePirate responds:

the overuse was meant to be annoying... so, that's a win for me.

[Project: Infiltrate]

i think someone saw shock....

it was a good animation :) i loves my stick figures, but like others said. the squeaky sound was kinda annoying. but the animations itself was good. but like my summary said. it resembles "shock" a lot. try something a bit more original nex time :D

CaKeS1 responds:

Yeah I lacked originality, and of course I've seen SHOCK it's a tribute to it :P But yeah I copied it too closely.

[RHG1 - Fugu VS Raygo]

i loves the stickmen...

however, this one wasn't the best. i get that you're new to animation, and that's great! but always have in mind that these are stick figures. animating stickfigures is a handicap in newgrounds. you have to REALLY BLOW THEM AWAY! otherwise do what i did and go for comedy :P

SniperFugu responds:

I understand. This wasn't primarily meant for NG but I decided to share it anyway. Right now, I don't have the skills or ideas to do something mind-blowing, but I'm working on it. Thanks for the review.

[Stick ppl fighting]

all right...

the animation was bad. BUT, from the looks of it you have barely started animating. having a play/pause button tells me that you're learning some good stuff. keep practicing.

OMGACOOKIE3 responds:

I have been animating for about a month O.o

[RHG-Renzu Demonstration 1]

what to improve?

first: make something longer. second: USE YOUR OWN BODY! this is something i do, look at yourself doing what you want your character to do. notice your legs, arms, hips, head. notice the position they are and try to imitate it with your drawings.
now go and make something that's twice has good.

darkdar4 responds:

Thx for the comment very helpful

[Sonic CD - Boom Animation]

really nice!

the visuals were not that great, BUT! this whole animation was done using frame by frame animation! i know this took a lot of time to make, and the effort showed. the angles you pulled off where good. just make the drawings better and you'll make something AWESOME! ;)

AllStarKid responds:

Thankyou! :) This by far is my best animation I've ever made. I might remaster this with color and more features and such. Thankyou though! :D